I’ve made my way through all the stories up for the Million Writers award, and I stand by what I said the other day about Matt Bell’s story. It’s still got my vote.
That said, I want to write a bit about Cat Rambo and Jeff VanderMeer’s “The Surgeon’s Tale.” When I realized this story was about bringing a corpse back to life, my interest flagged. I’ve read Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein many times, and I wondered what they could possibly add to that old story. I should have known better.
“The Surgeon’s Tale” is deeply weird and satisfying. The story takes place in an era of transition — a time when magic is dying out and science is taking the upper hand. The world is shifted just slightly from our own. The signs of the shift come in little unfamiliar turns of phrase. The narrator says his parents are “Preservationists,” as if this is a well-known profession, but the profession proves to be full of more mystery than is common in the mundane world. The narrator uses his preservationist background, his knowledge of science, and his dabblings in ancient books of magic to try to bring a woman back to life. He fails with most of her body, but succeeds in bringing her arm back to life.
From the story:
“She wasn’t moving. Her body still had the staunch solidity, the draining heaviness, of the dead. What I had taken to be a general awakening was just the water’s gentle motion. Only the arm moved with any purpose—and it moved toward me. It sought me out, reaching. It touched my cheek as I stood in the water there beside her, and I felt that touch everywhere.”
I found the resurrected life of the arm, and all that this brings to the narrator, perverse and moving. I don’t want to take away from the story’s surprises, but suffice to say the authors use the arm in some disturbing ways, as well as in some tender ways.
By the end, the story had won me over. I think it stands as proof of how archetypes work. They are archetypes precisely because they are evocative. Most powerful archetypal themes (such as that of the attempt to bring a dead person back to life) are in no danger of becoming cliches if the author goes the distance with them. These authors are not afraid to let the resurrected arm be just as weird and poignant as it needs to be. The result is that, while I do think of Frankenstein as I read the story, “The Surgeon’s Tale” is its own story.
It would be well for me to remember this. There may only be so many archetypes in the world, but that doesn’t seem to limit the wild weirdness of where writers can take them.
This concludes my series of posts on the Million Writers award. If you haven’t voted on your favorite story yet, you can do so here. I look forward to learning the results.
Categories: fantasy · reviews · single stories · writing process
Tagged: 2008 Million Writers Award for Fiction, archetypes, Cat Rambo, Frankenstein, Jeff VanderMeer, Mary Shelley, Matt Bell, The Surgeon's Tale, writing process
I’m wearing my technology reporter hat again. About two months ago, I decided to switch to doing all my writing on Adobe Buzzword, which is an online word processor. The primary reason is that I was driving myself crazy e-mailing different versions of various articles and stories to myself and to other people. To work on news articles for my day job at home, I had to remember to e-mail those files to myself, which are usually in Microsoft’s .doc format. Once home, I edited them using my Mac’s word processing program, called Pages, and then had to export them back to .doc and e-mail them back to myself at work. Since our IT guy at Technology Review recently upgraded me to Word 2007, that added even more compatibility issues, as I have to remember to convert files from Word 2007’s .docx format to the .doc format that other co-workers can read. I think this is a pretty typical story these days.
However, why Buzzword, and not one of the many other online applications such as Google Docs or IBM Lotus Symphony? I’ve got to say it’s for a superficial reason. Buzzword looks cool. Its default font, Minion Pro, which maps to Times New Roman when you export it to Word, is really, really pretty. Plus, I have hope that Adobe will soon build a version of Buzzword that works with its new AIR technology. If they do this, it will mean the best of both worlds for Buzzword — an application with the advantages of a word processor that runs online, but that also has the capability of running offline when needed.
Buzzword’s got other nice features that I won’t get into too much here — for example, it keeps track of versions as you save, so you can easily revert back to a past version of what you’re working on if you get off track. It’s also great to share what I’m working on with friends and family with the click of a button.
The unexpected consequence, though, that’s made me most happy with my decision to switch, is that I like having all my writing in one place. I’m usually on the razor edge of work-life balance. As you can see, I’m up at midnight writing a post that fits right into my workday. During the workday, I’m constantly bookmarking things that I want to look at when I get home. I’ve spent many years keeping my fiction-writing self and my nonfiction-writing self separate, to my detriment. There is something great about opening up Buzzword and seeing my short-story-in-progress about people who speak Klingon sitting there next to my in-progress article on a new microblogging service. I no longer feel like I left some of my soul at home.
Categories: reviews · writing process · writing tools
Tagged: Adobe Buzzword, reviews, technology, Web application, writing tools